Unlock Your Story’s Potential
Personalized feedback and coaching to make your personal essay or short story shine.
You’ve poured your heart onto the page.
You’ve written your essay or story.
Now, a question hangs in the air: Is it working?
It can feel impossible to know if your narrative arc is compelling, but you know it has potential. You just need a fresh, expert perspective to help you find the path forward.
That’s where I come in. I’m here to be your first trusted reader and collaborative partner.
This one-on-one session is the perfect next step if you:
- Feel stuck in revisions and aren’t sure what to fix next.
- Want to know if your piece is strong enough for submission to journals or publications.
- Crave a thoughtful, encouraging conversation about your work.
- Need a clear, actionable plan to elevate your draft to its final, polished form.
This isn’t just a critique; it’s a complete feedback experience designed to give you clarity, confidence, and a renewed sense of excitement about your writing.
What You’ll Receive for $150:
- An In-Depth Manuscript Review I will read your personal essay or short story (up to 5,000 words) with deep attention, focusing on what makes it unique while identifying key areas for growth—from structure and pacing to character development and voice.
- Feedback Inside Your Manuscript You’ll receive a comprehensive notes in your manuscript, detailing what’s working and what can improve. This isn’t generic advice; it’s a clear, actionable roadmap for your revision, filled with specific suggestions and insights. Feedback includes notes on structure, theme or emotional core, execution, prose, and even a bit or proofreading.
- A 60-Minute One-on-One Strategy Session We’ll meet for a one-hour video call to discuss your story in depth. This is our time to brainstorm solutions, untangle any issues, and answer all of your questions. You’ll leave our conversation feeling inspired, unstuck, and ready to write.
Ready to Take the Next Step?
Investing in your writing is investing in yourself. Let’s work together to make your story unforgettable.
Have a question?
- What if my draft is messy or incomplete? That’s perfectly okay! I can provide feedback at any stage of the writing process, from a rough first draft to a nearly-finished piece.
- What’s the turnaround time? You can typically expect to receive your editorial notes within 7-10 business days after you book your session.
- What happens after I book? You’ll receive an email confirmation with a link to schedule your one-hour session and instructions on how to submit your manuscript.